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You Slept Through The Alarm Again - Little Aubade

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February 15, 2012
You Slept Through The Alarm Again is a fluid and sensual aubade by *Tsume-Yamagata.
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If, perhaps, you had turned at that moment
and your hair had caught in your fingers,
the straw being fed into the spindle, struck
by the high, thin light of first waking, the whorl
of a single line descendent from the sun, born
watery from the gap below one velveteen curtain,
all of it staining over gold and dusty and slow,
the edge of your mouth might have met the edge
of my mouth, narrow gaps both without attention
opening—if, perhaps you had turned again,
your hand could have met the curve of my neck,
your canvas rough fingers tying knots of my hair
and I would have sighed, thick spreading in your ear
like the light itself learning to speak in tongues
you might understand—if perhaps you had
opened your eyes, squinting, eyelashes caged
together, it all would have been edgeless and bright.
....and now you're late for work.



For final poetry workshop portfolio. Was required to write form poems. Here is an aubade. Not quite as traditional as it should be, but hey... It exists.



Edit: My third lit DD! Thank you so, so much! It remains amazing and astonishing to me how many people respond to poetry DDs and I am beyond honored to receive this one. Your comments and favs really make my day and remind me again and again why writing poetry is always worth it! Thank you all so very much, and a special thank you to $wreckling for featuring this. (Ha ha, but going back over this poem just now I can already see things that should be changed--I guess that's the writer's life though!)
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This is amazing. :heart: