Cloud in a Bottle 2
And if anything, in essence, could change the way you do,
don’t think (for a moment) I would not take it in between
my two hands, heart and head lines touching, to chart
somewhere in the region of the archer's bow, lips against
something like you in two palms, reading a sea-change
in hot airs between chapped valleys and intimation.
You went out without hearing the best part of the story, which was:
with my last wish I switched your skin for the skin of a shark, my skin
for mole, so that you could be a leaver of marks on a map, pliable, still
lamenting that I had not been born the Maker of things to make you
just a
Sicher auch mit Englisch. D; Ich arbeite als Englisch Lehrerin für die University of Southern California, und jeden Tag finde ich Amerikanische Studenten die nicht schreiben können... Wissen die Kommaregeln nicht, und sowas. Aber natürlich weiß ich auch nicht JEDE Regel, auf Englisch... und vor allem nicht auf Deutsch. XD
I don't really ever use deviantart anymore but I felt the need to tell you that your writing inspires me a lot in multiple ways. I really love your style and when I start reading it's hard to stop. Keep on keepin' on. (if I ever hear of you releasing a book to the amazon store or something I will buy it in a heartbeat just saying.)